Star Ratings: 4
The three I’s
Innovative, Interesting and Illusory are the elements that make this book stand out. Twenty-six alphabets of the English language serve as the starting letter of the title of each of the twenty-six chapters. It’s an innovative approach holding the readers’ interest, which the author has successfully achieved by penning 26 short stories that are illusory in nature. The language used by the author makes each of the stories feel pregnant with suspense and when you start reading them, you cannot help but guess the end. And that’s where the author uses his master stroke in lending the illusory nature to these stories, for you think you are being led on to the right track, but at the climax, the author skillfully changes track and leads you to an expected and bitter-sweet ending.
Untouched perspectives
In death, we always tend to think about the family members of the departed, but what about the departed? How does it feel while departing? Does anyone spare a thought for them? Even his dying characters come to life with lines like these. "His mind had stopped working; another voice was saying something, but his head was buzzing now and he could hardly make out anything. No one noticed the tears collect at the corner of his eyes and slowly roll down. All he wanted to do was to tell them, he was not brain dead. To scream at them and tell them he could still hear. Yes, he could not move, could not speak, or open his eyes, but damn it, he could still hear."
Or when it comes to a convicted criminal we only look at his crime, do we care to or dare to look beyond his crime and dissect the situation that converted a carefree, loving human to a heartless criminal? "They gestured to my father to the furthest corner and squatted down, speaking softly and rapidly to him. I saw him, his head lowered, listening to them in rapt attention. I saw one of the fat men take out a gun from one pocket and a big wad of notes from another. He put both on the floor- between him and my father. After an eternity, my father picked up the cash. Barely an hour later, I left with those men with a small bundle strapped to my shoulder; it had some clothes, a tin of sweets, and a tabeez that a fakir had given my mother for me- to keep me safe from the Djinns."
Lost in the pages of this book, one is sure to find some direction towards understanding the deepest of human emotions.
The Story
It’s a platter of several human emotions. From the feelings of an unborn child to those of a man lying on death bed and several stages in between, this book contains a plethora of emotions and perspectives that are sure to make you sit up, take notice and look and think beyond the obvious. Street urchins and their lives, prostitutes and the workings of their mind, gay men and their dualities, women and their ultimate desperation for a biological child are some of the varied aspects that this book covers. Interestingly some of the secondary characters assume primary importance and become the protagonist in subsequent chapters, so when one chapter ends you are left with a feeling that you might meet your character again and see his or her actions from another perspective.
Kudos for:
Handling many ultra-sensitive issues with immense responsibility and in the process actually helping the reader in broadening one’s horizon. Writing in a lucid yet enticing style, so much so that it builds up suspense from the first line which is ultimately revealed only at the end. And how? Excerpt from one of stories titled ‘Nitin Bent Minds’.
"The entries in the diary were not really true; at least most of the things you might have read, and the police sure did. And dropping the silencer there was also deliberate, though I knew it would pose a bit of a problem- why? And as you will soon realize, I could not have done it myself. So I hired someone to do it (and he sure is not talking). Every evidence, every lead, and every clue- I had planted. Turn the page Varsha and you will know what happened that night. May you bleed to death, and yet not die."
Beautifully scraping off the upper façade of his protagonists to reveal their innermost real selves to the readers.
Only hitch:
Only hitch:
In some of the stories the build-up to the suspense is so much, that there are chances the reader might lose track of the beginning. So at times grasping the depth of the story might get difficult, nevertheless if you are an alert reader then this will not be a hassle for you.
Reason for star ratings:
Embarking on a journey from before birth to beyond death and in the process his protagonists touch upon some of the very innermost of human emotions, those that one does not have the courage to accept.Intelligently segmenting the book with an interesting concept of alphabetical order to start each story with.
The author sure deserves credit for digging beyond the mundane and unearthing some preciously special emotions, which one tends to overlook in the rigmarole of daily life schedule. Rukhsat- The Departure truly departs from the beaten track as it never ceases to amaze you with its spontaneity. The protagonists’ style of departure at the end of each of the short stories is thought provoking indeed.
The line that stayed with me:
I kept quiet and let D let go of herself; this was that crucial moment when she had to get used to the empty house of hers and then fill it up with light and hope; with purpose.
I kept quiet and let D let go of herself; this was that crucial moment when she had to get used to the empty house of hers and then fill it up with light and hope; with purpose.

